tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518205666741301385.post4812327626974591514..comments2023-06-21T03:38:41.876-06:00Comments on The Author's Desk: a chest full of childhood...Sarah Annehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11525949118660493801noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518205666741301385.post-50281658445902905502009-10-15T18:48:00.067-06:002009-10-15T18:48:00.067-06:00I noticed that, Coleman. Thanks for pointing it ou...I noticed that, Coleman. Thanks for pointing it out. :)<br /><br />Thanks, everyone!Sarah Annehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11525949118660493801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518205666741301385.post-30872786848829345102009-10-15T17:22:40.100-06:002009-10-15T17:22:40.100-06:00Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!
IT WAS GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!
I l...Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!<br />IT WAS GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!<br /><br />I loved the personalities of the people--I was shocked by how wonderfully it was writen.<br /><br />You did say you wanted a little bit of feed back so I'll say I<br />L-O-V-E-D it. there is just one little thing I'd do. After the whole array of objects in the chest, there was a "were there." I would subtract that but I aint' a editor:)COLEMANhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05230341708622810078noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518205666741301385.post-45324946019484275352009-10-15T13:00:43.132-06:002009-10-15T13:00:43.132-06:00I thought that was great! You really made me want...I thought that was great! You really made me want to keep reading it. Good job.<br /><br />-FringeGirlAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518205666741301385.post-38012411040637772012009-10-15T10:33:38.512-06:002009-10-15T10:33:38.512-06:00If you need to cut something, I'd say you don&...If you need to cut something, I'd say you don't really need to talk about Vera.Qhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08756447854917857756noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518205666741301385.post-59247417023369564992009-10-15T10:10:56.198-06:002009-10-15T10:10:56.198-06:00Love your story, Georgie. Such a contrast between ...Love your story, Georgie. Such a contrast between the two older women. And you fill in their characters nicely with the dialogue. It's true; lasting beauty lies within us.<br /><br />Good luck! I'm chairing Reflections in my kids school right now. I think the theme is gonna produce some awesome entries like yours.Jewel Allenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09614039445924074306noreply@blogger.com